Fashion Icon. Poem by M. Asim Nehal
Fashion Icon.
That lady walks in high heels so fine,
her costly handbag, a fashion divine.
Gaudy makeup, daring and brave,
She appears like a fairy, caution to stave.
Her heels so high, it's a wonder she stands,
but she struts with grace, all across the lands,
her purse is so costly, it must have been dear,
but it complements her, with nothing to fear.
Her makeup so bold, it's hard to ignore,
but who am I to judge, I'm no fashion store,
she's a visual treat, a walking masterpiece,
with each step she takes, she captures few hearts.
Let her flaunt high heels and purse so dear,
gaudy makeup, with no reason to jeer,
for she's a dame like no other, a true fashion queen,
And I wonder who would be part of her perfect dream.
And how they catch rich and fame in their nets. Good poem, Asim.
line 12: I suggest you check grammarly. com to read the difference between using 'few hearts' and 'a few hearts'. it's subtle, but significant!
The 2nd stanza I don't recall from when you sent the poem to me in a message. Is it 'new' or just 'different' I wonder.
This is wonderful poem. Poet's pen is mightier than Judge's gavel.
I esp. like 'nothing to fear' and 'no reason to jeer'. I thought 'jeer' referred to a expression of annoyance/disgust. Wrong. But I find it (as a verb) is 'To abuse vocally; taunt.'
(cont.) .....the night off. Yes! Then it is just HER & ME, left to discuss fashion etc. and eat popcorn (and ice cream, OF COURSE) . bri : )
I, Bri, am, OF COURSE, the leader of 'her perfect team'. Usually she gives the rest of the team
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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These lines says it all 'she's a visual treat, a walking masterpiece, with each step she takes, she captures few hearts.' Full ****
is that 'Full **** ', or was it meant to be 'Full ***** '? I wonder. It's EASY to make a mistake online, but often IMPOSSIBLE or difficult to erase/correct.