Hasmukh Amathalal

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Fast Without - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Fast without food/water
Thursday,9th May 2019

It is holy fasting
the joy is everlasting
as surrender is made to an almighty
for the internal purity

as the name speaks
it is a blessing in disguise for the weak
who try to see through divine vision
and pray for all the humans

it is not easy to fast without water
and last
the whole day waiting for the sun to disappear
the stomach inches near for food

we all derive the strength
from the faith
and the religious rituals
it is good for all the individuals

it gives not only strength and purity
but reflects faith in the name of an almighty
my friend reminds me daily
but sticks to the holy spirit heartily

there may be millions
who wish to be a good human
regardless of what place or nation they belong
the prayers go for the well being

Hasmukh Mehta

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  • (5/16/2019 11:48:00 PM)

    HAPPY BIRTHDAY AND PH'S GIFT TODAY (Report)Reply

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  • (5/16/2019 11:46:00 PM)

    HAPPY BIRTHDAY AND POEM OF THE DAY
    MAY YOU BE THE FIRSTEST SOON
    ONE DAY
    IF NOT TODAY
    SOME DAY
    ERE I PASS AWAY
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  • (5/16/2019 8:22:00 AM)

    Reflection of faith in an almighty beautifully versified. Congrats on poem of the Day. (Report)Reply

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  • Sylvia Frances Chan (5/16/2019 5:17:00 AM)

    In the early evening, facing to Mecca the fasting will be ended each day with plenty of food in groups with the same religion, the islam religion, the moslems of the world. My highest appreciations for this worldly fasting. CONGRATULATIONS for a well deserved Member Poem Of The Day, Hurray! (Report)Reply

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  • Drtony Brahmin (5/16/2019 5:10:00 AM)

    it gives not only strength and purity
    but reflects faith in the name of an almighty
    my friend reminds me daily
    but sticks to the holy spirit heartily.. a very fine poem dear Hasmukh..Amathalal. tony
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  • Mahtab Bangalee (5/16/2019 1:17:00 AM)

    Yeah; the Fasting
    .. gives not only strength and purity
    but reflects faith in the name of an almighty//// it's Holy Fasting For The Sake Of God
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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (5/16/2019 1:10:00 AM)

    Holy fasting gives us purity and immense joy. Internal purity matters a lot that dignifies us with true beauty. Millions wish to be good human beings but who become pure among them, they behold really nice personalities. Prayers are for well-being of the persons and society. This poem is an outstanding poem. (Report)Reply

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (5/16/2019 1:06:00 AM)

    Your poems truly bring tremor in the poetic world and among the readers. This poem has also brought a charming tremor today and we are truly glad seeing your poem in this list. (Report)Reply

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (5/16/2019 1:04:00 AM)

    Oh dear great poet, CONGRATULATIONS! CONGRATULATIONS! CONGRATULATIONS! This is nice to see your another worthy poem as the poem of the day today. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, May 8, 2019

Poem Edited: Thursday, May 9, 2019


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