Sonya Florentino

Rookie (Manila, Philippines (residing NYC))

# Fatad Accident - Poem by Sonya Florentino

There was no way to escape your smile

My heart was set in free motion

Fantasy now seems strange and distant

With our nearness creating this friction

I was starting to believe

I would never find true love

Little did I know....

How fantastic!


© 2009 Sonya Florentino

Note: I wrote this poem as an entry to a contest created by fanstory.com. The contest was to use 10 words in a poem, namely:

smile - heart - escape - fantasy - believe - little - motion - fantastic - distant - friction


Comments about # Fatad Accident by Sonya Florentino

  • (12/21/2009 7:02:00 AM)


    'Fantasy now seems strange and distant
    With our nearness creating this friction'...

    ten words or not, you have expressed best of your poetics especially there in the quoted line...expressions fantasy/distance and nearness/ friction showing beauitiful mutual co-operation...nice work...10
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  • (12/17/2009 9:40:00 AM)


    that's a wonderful exercise...whether prize or no prize! (Report) Reply

  • (12/8/2009 10:33:00 AM)


    Wow, excellent job incorporating all those random words! Reading it, you would never think it was forced or contrived. Very good Sonya! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, December 8, 2009

Poem Edited: Saturday, February 6, 2010


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