Fate-10 Poem by lily peace lago every by to ph

Fate-10

Rating: 5.0
 


When the bullet strike
when the poisonous snake bite
your smile keep fate at bay...
When the thorn stitches your feet
Fate smiles at you in grave....

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Amazing economy in words but boundless message 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Antonio Liao 06 November 2009

you make my day laugh...so nice..so beautiful..so true....you even hold my breath.....a well seated in the lament of a poem..... thank you my friend....until this moment my heart laugh....with your great poem....i am happy...God bless....a 10 +++

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Eyan Desir 26 October 2009

Fate sounds evil No! fate is your writing on the wall Uncovered in time...anyway good write

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Shashendra Amalshan 24 October 2009

Great imagery here ma'am. Very well written verse. Nice love Shan

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Rakesh Bedi 23 October 2009

beautiful, lago lago.....keep it up......

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