She Is.... Poem by lily peace lago every by to ph

She Is....

Rating: 5.0


Wind mill

spending with her
electrified love spread
all in us.....

Volcano

Magma in her erupt
and the lava poured
to cool us.....

Radar

Her radar eyes detect me
when hovering around
catch me in her in warmth current....

Nucleus

She is the centric
trigger me to stay intact...

Sensor

Bites are sensuous
and the lips are sensors...

She is in me.....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Juniper March 01 October 2009

very nice and sensuous

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Indira Babbellapati 01 October 2009

an interesting read, lady....

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Catrina Heart 01 October 2009

an electrifying description of SHE...........great comparison...Thanks! ! ! 10

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Ramesh T A 01 October 2009

A Hot She is irresistible it seems in this passionate expression!

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Maitreyee Joshi 01 October 2009

scientific passion merged into a unique poem.a different, yet a catchy write.

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Prof. Dr. Sakti Chakravorty 09 October 2009

Indeed she is dispenser of every thing if we yearn her as only and alone SHE. Dispensing ten to you She. dr.sakti Cordially invite to read and comment on my poems

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 October 2009

Sensor Bites are sensuous and the lips are sensors... She is in me..... she is everything for me from teacher.care takeninspirer and so on....no one cantake her position.lovely write and exemplary intodays date......10 read mineanywhere....miss i miss u...

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Sarwar Chowdhury 05 October 2009

remarkable she! fine phrasology! excellent! 10+

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Anjali Sinha 04 October 2009

wowwwwwww your like a bomb ready to explode very nice-I enjoyed it -10 anjali

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Raj Arumugam 03 October 2009

power-packed and just full of energy! ! ! !

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