City Poems: 250 / 500

**fog**

Rating: 4.4

Lovely little white cat
set its paw over the harbour
moving into the city
a silent bless for lover`s joy.....

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indira Babbellapati 06 November 2009

reverse racism...hahaha!

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Kesav Easwaran 05 November 2009

the 'cat's paw/ fog' metaphor is really appealing...good...10

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Ejaz Khan 04 November 2009

A short and lovely write, beautiful metaphor!

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Tai Chi Italy 04 November 2009

Two sets of Fog on the one stage LL! I like them both, this one is cute and lucky cat to neither fall into the harbour nor get run down in the city. So many levels this poem grabs my imagination. Thanks for sharing Smiling at you Tai

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Ramesh T A 04 November 2009

Nice metaphor for fog makes it beautiful!

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Noel Horlanda 17 November 2009

good write, short and brief. Yeah my interpretation of this piece is it is the nature of fog to crawl all over like a feline or cat so silent, so soft and wise predator.

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Eyan Desir 09 November 2009

Short but your words captures the poem well.. good job..

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Antonio Liao 08 November 2009

like a cat...tickles with many wonder... Superb poem of ecstasy....thank you for sharing...God bless....a 10 +++

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This is beautiful lago. I love cats and my ragdoll cat was run over a few months ago. The metaphor is lovely too! 10 love Karin

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 November 2009

Lovely little white cat set its paw over the harbour moving into the city a silent bless for lover`s joy..... it is nice to ponder ovr beautiful poem.. good imagination....10 read mine...cats all over...cuckoo

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