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**at The Brink Of Our Eyes**

Rating: 3.1

At the brink of our eyes flowing abound in us
a solitude sonnet born from our heart
and the bubble in our eyes never burst
and the biggest emotions never explored..

The fastiduous waves
chasing one another
dashing the shores in ablation
the unsaid love within us to explode....

Yet, the tremulous nerves
set ablaze the magnificient eyes
where the unsaid love in us,
at the brink of our eyes enjoyed in calm..

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ian Bowen 11 November 2009

Some excellent lines in your well written poem.10/10 Regards. Ian

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Ranjit Ravindran 11 November 2009

Unsaid love... some times its understood, sometimes misunderstood and at most times not understood! liked these lines: ........................................................... where the unsaid love in us, at the brink of our eyes enjoyed in calm ...........................................................

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Antonio Liao 25 November 2009

silent of the immortality of the soul gallops the vision of this poem.....full of memory to share, just a remembrance of time....the post hoc of present down to the last day of our stay...its life to remember forever, through out eternity .....thank you for sharing...a 10/10

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Jyoti Saxena 23 November 2009

'and the bubble in our eyes never burst' the emotion in these words are so strong and so well propounded that one can almost feel it -and live it -you have given words to the sensation which was otherwise hard to express-thank you rago for sharing them.

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Noel Horlanda 17 November 2009

the first and second stanzas are well written and meaningful, lovely indeed...cheers

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Catrina Heart 11 November 2009

Marvelous composition my friend.........lovely dear!

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Sadiqullah Khan 11 November 2009

unsaid love.....................................

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