Fear Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Fear

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This fear is killing all of us,
ups and downs of life is measured in fear,
The fear is making life miserable,
A quantum fear takes solid toll on present and future!
The gamut of love is measured in fear,
Another fear is waiting in the bent,
You avoid this fear thinking hope is there
this grey area yet grows more fear
they create more stories by articulate creativity,
And sell their ideas as you see fear making its ways.
Their lie are the secret of your catch,
weak mind bowing down to situation,
shift drifted from hope and faith to ozone fear,
confused mind surrenders to the situation and goes in doldrums.
Castle falls by breaking down the sandy walls,
as if leafs have started to fall in spring.
This fear may shatter those wonderful dreams,
like mirage after false rain making traveler all pains,
No matter what they do, let them create smoky dew
when sunrays will break the darkened wall,
Fear will vanish like firefly in bright light,
faith will return with eagle's flight
Hope will beat this fear to death,
But who knows what fear will fry,
Die a silent death or make resurgence like phoenix.

Saturday, November 5, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: fear
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem deals with inner fear and fear created by others in human life.We all have inbuilt fear associated with every good things like fear of failure attached to success, fear of losing someone attached to our relationship with them, fear of death attached to the life we live, fear of punishment attached to our actions and dealings. This fear is silently killing all of us be it our creativity, enthusiasm, experimentation, adventures or progressiveness, it builds a web wherein our thoughts and ideas get trapped and strangulated and they do not dare to come out of it.

You are left with two choices to make - one to carry your fear and allow it to attach when you are weak and down or to let it go, ride on it to succeed, let it, to take you to extreme and then bounce back on success by leaving it all alone.

What makes you fearful is something you need to write down and then ask and explore why that makes you fearful? Do you have any control over them if so then why you are carrying it, what it takes to leave, the answer is hidden within all questions that you ask yourselves. Try it out, ask, ask and ask till you get the answer, once you know the answer you will laugh out louder how and why you were carrying it on your back. The thin line between success and failure will vanish and what you will see the outcome is a "Result", Result which is neither success nor failure, simply the enjoyment and experience which you will start cherishing.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chuy Amante 06 November 2016

fear or love all proceeds after these we choose there is either LOVE or an opportunity to love more

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Bharati Nayak 05 November 2016

It is really wonderful how you analyse 'fear, a big factor in human life.Fear is a negative feeling that impedes human progress.Weak minds fall easy prey to 'Fear'.Fear is like a demon who eats our vitality.It seen that in modern days when the whole world is connected through internet, or T.V. fear spreads more quickly and affect general mass so easily..- - - - - - - -Thanks for sharing your beautiful poem.

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 November 2016

A quantum fear! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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M Asim Nehal 05 November 2016

Anita Sharma Anita Sharma (10/20/2015 5: 44: 00 PM) very wisely written.liked (Report) Reply 3 person liked. 0 person did not like. Rajnish Manga Rajnish Manga (10/5/2015 12: 14: 00 AM) Highly poetic and psychoanalytical interpretation of FEAR, a mental condition intimidating to most of us. But by adopting a tough stance against it, we can change the scenario to our advantage, we can change our fears into lasting ecstasy. Thanks for sharing with us some practical tips. confused mind surrenders to the situation and goes in doldrums. Die a silent death or make resurgence like phoenix. (Report) Reply 5 person liked. 1 person did not like. T Rajan Evol (10/4/2015 9: 59: 00 AM) Asimji, You nailed it with this poem, Fear is what everybody else is capitalising on, be it doctor, engineers, LIC company, Government or anybody else, they play with your fear, explore and exploit your fear, a crafty poem on FEAR..Good Job,10 for this poem, thanks and God bless you. (Report) Reply 4 person liked. 1 person did not like. Read all 3 comments »

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