Few Wishes! Poem by Geetha Jayakumar

Few Wishes!

Rating: 4.8


Very few wishes I was expecting
May be of few words that I longed to hear today.

May be the flowers bloomed were less today
May be the sunrays didn’t hug me today.
May be the warmth breeze forgot to kiss me today.

May be the sweetest breeze,
didn’t carry the words of fragrance nor do any warmth of love.

After all the wishes are just made of few words.

But if the love and fragrance
doesn’t exists in those wishes
the wishes doesn't carry any sense.

When path is blocked with memories
those memories I have to unblock it
As they stood in my path
obstructing the clear view
to move forward.

Coolly and slowly
Every wishes will be faded
One day to become a few memories.
I am slowly setting my mind to freeze.
Moving a head!

Forget the wishes
Forget the memories
Those were just blocking me.
They were just the blockages in my heart.
Today is just reminding me, to think of only tomorrow!

©ALL RIGHTS RESERVED BY GEETHA JAYAKUMAR 2014
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tirupathi Chandrupatla 27 February 2014

Wishes carry sense only when loaded with love. Nicely said. Thank you.

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Rajesh Thankappan 28 February 2014

Every wishes will be faded One day to become a few memories. Nicely said since our present fades into the background and they become twinkling memories. And as you rightly say, true wishes should be backed by true intends.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 April 2014

Forget the wishes Forget the memories.. lovely lines....10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 March 2014

After all the wishes are just made of few words., , nice one...10 if wishes had wings i could send then in ring which could have aired music while opening its wraps.............

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Kanav Justa 04 March 2014

May be the flowers bloomed were less today May be the sunrays didn’t hug me today. May be the warmth breeze forgot to kiss me today., , , , nice lines, , , ,

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 01 March 2014

A thing to become a memory has to be a wish first............Geetha.......unless wishes are entertained we can not move forward.............they are like hopes fuelling lives towards goal......very well composed....loved it

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Valsa George 01 March 2014

Todays wishes whether fulfilled or not will become yesterday's memories! But without beautiful wishes, life will become morose and dull! So keep sweet wishes for tomorrow and wait for them to be materialised! If not realized, accept it! Sweet write, Geetha!

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