* Final Sunset Sail Poem by Bonnie Collins

.....wow....you made me cry: ') Reading that was like watching a heart bleed....and i mean all of this in a good way. it was so full of emotion...even in that tiny little poem. it was exceptionally beautiful. i loved it. that's an automatic 'poem favourite'

Exceptional display of free-verse, young lady...Poetic in it's own right...Romantic in any light....delectable with every bite...You Rock Ms. Bonnie! FjR

this is a very strong expression of refusal...this will go to my fav...naizz

very beautiful and touching piece. fanastic job.

a very touching write....a break up is torturous and completely uprooting a person from yourself is difficult

Parting does not mean stop loving someone and how confident you are about your love!

Beautifully written and like prayer, you can pray and they can't stop you, and as your poem states you can love someone and no one can stop you. Just a great write. Lynn

I like the way you use casual speech patterns to get across intimacy. With just a few well-chosen images you make a dramatic statement of love. Thank you or sharing.

There is a beautiful strength to this piece. I loved the attitude. Do not tell me how long to love you because it is my choice for eternity. Excellent job. Very well written piece.

A superb metaphor titles and concludes this perceptive, honest and deeply felt poem about love. I wrote one once called 'The Love is in You'. I think your words here express my belief that the love IS in you, which is why the love never dies, even when you 'move on'. The love nestles in your heart and rears its graceful head at the oddest moments. I guess you take it to your own grave. This is a very moving poem which I'm sure will tug at many a heart string. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥