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Finding You

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I got lost.
I stumbled.
Walked too far on a strange
and dark road.
I was in anguish.
I had nothing.
Living a life without life.

My voice
had no one to cry out for.

My empty hands had nothing.
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Subroto Chatterjee 24 April 2009

Hey, You just said that you didn't want to give your heart, etc. Whoaaaaa! ! Women! ! Cheers. Subroto

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Kefentse Sathekge 21 April 2009

lovely warm poem. straight from the heart. i enjoyed it.

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Ruth Walters 16 April 2009

I just had to tweak this a little and wondered what you think now? I liked your version but had to alter it a little for myself. I got lost. I stumbled. Walked too far on a strange, dark road. I was in anguish. I had nothing. A life without life. I had no one to cry out for. Empty hands; I was a portrait of depression. My nights were all cold.... Almost dying, without hope, I saw you. You gave me strength and renewed my life. Today I confess I love you Each day in life I love you more. My hands hold your hands. My voice calls to you.

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Cordell Rich 10 April 2009

This is a nice piece. I enjoyed it. I think the beginning is stronger than the ending but a very nice piece. Id live to invite you to visit a site I spend time on that I wonderful www.ccpoets.com Good piece

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