Buried Alive Poem by emo girl

Buried Alive

Rating: 2.5


Inside that feeling of depression..........
It's not just a silly superstiotion...........
It's hard to make this confession........

I'm buried alive.................
I believe that no one can help me to survive.............................
I'm sick of this pathetic life...............
and i think it's all based on a horrible big lie..................

still there..laying there
inside that fearful place.....
where a feeling of death hung upon the air..........
oh god this's so unfair.............
my life has become an abhorrent endless nightmare................

inside that gloomy place..
where every thing is dark and..........
and the sun will never shine upon my pale face................
oh god how can i get rid of all these choking scares? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?
how can i get out of this frightening place............

so hard to get rid of the weight of thise feeling laying inside my brittle poor heart...........
this feeling of depression it makes me fall apart..........

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rishi Menon 29 October 2008

your poetry has the mystique of the mountains covered in dew.... beautiful on the outside, deep secrets within....one can imagine the hurt and suffering of those trapped by their own thoughts...a very deep poem. extreme. well done. Ash(Rishi's Dad)

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Salu Salu 10 November 2008

man is born alone, life itself is challenging you are the warrior to win ur world, it's different to all......... I love accepting the life as it comes, so it's blessing.... in another sense I fight with relentlessly, for what I don't know dear girl, life itself is fun................ it rolls on as the cycles destiny. fine poem...... rgrds/salu

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Jordan Davis 24 December 2007

Wow, I think this is great and you deserve to be at the top of the list, this is good stuff! Keep writing and don't be depressed, I've been depressed lots, but I keep going on. If you have problems, talk to your parents, or your teachers. JORDAN P.S. sorry if I'm getting to personal.

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Princess De Lys 05 February 2008

i am readin your poems and ur really talkin about me this is the second 1 and am gonna read em all i guess they r gr8

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Shelton Posey 23 May 2008

This Poem Reminds Me Of... Me.... I Love It...

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Merna Ibrahim 29 December 2009

Indeed, a good description to a depressing feeling..10++ Merna

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Pls.call.me.sux Unknown 29 December 2009

GOOD WORK YEAH I MEAN... GREAT ;)

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Ronald Doku 03 June 2009

really good poem. what can i say, you were born to write. really good.

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this is a good poem you write real well

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Amy Douglass (Fifita) 27 December 2008

wow what a great poem. It's so full of emotion.

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