Fire Cracker (A Senryu) Poem by Sandra Martyres

Fire Cracker (A Senryu)

Rating: 5.0


A bright fire cracker
Sped across the skies leaving
Trails of coloured stars

Monday, October 19, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: fire,leaving
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mamta Agarwal 23 October 2009

you have captured the beauty of the moment in words. i can see, hear and revel in the sight. love it Mamta

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Kesav Easwaran 20 October 2009

imagination on fire...thanks...

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Patti Masterman 19 October 2009

Fireworks seem to be an imitation of the splendor of the heavens (one that everyone seems to love every much too) .

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Alf Hutchison 19 October 2009

Delightful Sandra fond Regards Alf

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 19 October 2009

a spectacular sight the last two days...a beautiful senryu

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