First Fall First Rise Poem by Akhtar Jawad

First Fall First Rise

Rating: 5.0


Long brown, silky and perfumed,
An electrical wire with a current induced,
A hair I see, whose it can be?
With the seeds of a fruit beneath a tree,
That lit the tubes of heavenly neon lights,
How airy are now the warming nights,
That moved the blades of the static fan,
How happy next day is the man!
After a kiss in fact the bliss of the bliss,
A hair of Eve that fell in the first kiss!

Tuesday, November 5, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chima Ononogbu 05 November 2019

A poem well decorated with deep thoughts and imagination.

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Anil Kumar Panda 07 November 2019

Such a nice poem that makes an interesting reading. Thanks for posting.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 06 November 2019

a hairy fairy poemy ja ji where did the hair come at the kiss oooo now this dull pp me also sees hera pheri

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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 November 2019

A lovely poem sir! Beautifully expressed.....10

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C F 06 November 2019

Quite imaginative... well written.10+

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Khalida Bano Ali 05 November 2019

Flowing beauty a poem to remember long.

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