First Flight Of The Birds Poem by Akhtar Jawad
First Flight Of The Birds
These may be smiles, these may be tears
Both tell the stories of so many years
It's easy to read the story of a smiling face
Weather is pink like a rose with all its grace
Pleasant winds are titillating like a bird in love
A carefree romantic flight of a newlywed dove
Grownup young ones' first outing from the nest
Moment to moment something new and the best
What a time! I swear it's the time of the breathing clay
Day better than the night and night better than the day
Moon looks better than the sun and sun better than moon
Good morning, good evening, good noon and good afternoon
Flowers are dancing and the sun looks like a toy
Simply, one who is smiling is excited in a joy.
Life is lovely; the season is singing the spring song
Everything is finely right and nothing is wrong
Stars twinkling and transmitting some naughty illusions
Night is sharing its experiences with the bird in passions.
Enjoy sweetheart! But life is a blending of smiles and tears
Stand boldly and bravely, no need of uncalled fears,
Sometimes rainfalls are frozen in the hard icicles
But the sun true in love, rises again in regular cycles
Time changes like the seasons so be changed a little
Icicles are melted though at the moment may be brittle
Every season has something nice that can be admired
Need love and understanding when the wings are tired
Wonderful piece on beauty of season and joy of a tired heart..understanding and acceptance make life more beautiful
Mercy Sir Akhtar, this is excellent, it reminds me of fluent Persian poems by Saadi Shirazi, You are fully aware that it is a great art to make it in English. Very Sepas and Dorood. (I suppose you know Persian) .
The ups and downs of life are superbly inked in this very captivating and engaging poem. The visual detail is exquisite as is the use of various figures of speech. Life so charmingly captured! Thank you for sharing, dear friend Akhtar...
A beautiful and heartwarming write like the two beautiful ladies in the picture attached to this poem. Wonderfully written imbued with wisdom and insight. Very inspiring.
(2) this is my utmost appreciative comment for the poet of this great amazing and abundant poetic creating. Thank you so much for all this Beauty, Akhtar Sir! Loveliest photograph added here. My salutations of love for you, dear poet. An amazing blend of love in life, smiles and tears all those years. Poem full of magnificence in all excellence.
I don't want to stay behind and am reading now the abundant poem of the poet so very kind. He can create such a strong song, not one line or tune but a season long, the words he shared are all well cared and love great patient love is the answer to this poetic fair, love in this poem gives endless enjoyment, PLEASE READ (2) THANK YOU
Night is sharing! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Wonderful poem yet again, Every line brings freshness to the poem, Like mother she will be a wonderful daughter, pious wife and greatest mother, I wish you and your entire family best wishes and Dua'A May ALLAH shower HIS mercy on all of them. I quote: Pleasant winds are titillating like a bird in love A carefree romantic flight of a newlywed dove Grownup young ones' first outing from the nest Moment to moment something new and the best
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lovely poetic expression /// adieu, adieu this is not new feel fair in welfare don’t fear o’ dear this is life ebb and tide everywhere those who knows both these he can enjoy all through pleasure