First Light Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

First Light

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Who are you oh painter?
How are you smiling?
Under the beneath of cracked cloud,
From whom you have got power?
Will not you whisper?
Oh dear smiley child of dawn,
We know, we know about,
You are First Light,
You are first painter,
Bringing essence of delighted mind,
You have brought up father's message!

Flaxen horizon has decorated sigh,
Green foliage motivate mind,
A female falcon has captured sun,
Purlin is purple and passport alike,
Patches of cloud form palmetto,
Melon is freshly cultivated
And mellorine is produced
Under the warmth of mosaic of cloud,
Oh, we see a cascade of beam,
Casanova is urging for love in Earth,
A castle is built for ceremony,
Casanova beholding the hand of new angel
He will enter into the utopia,
Oh dear First Light, we know!

Under the parasol of airspace,
Shaft will be shifted in shape of soy,
Molecular arrangement is witnessed,
Charmer has fed cashew-nut to sun,
Charitable charisma is captured
Under the ripple of ray of bliss,
Cosmos cossets the cloth of cloud,
We weather the sunny sagacity,
God is greatly praised from inner core!

© Kumarmani Mahakul,12 May 2020. All rights reserved.

First Light
Tuesday, May 12, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: beauty,nature,nature love,spirituality
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Cover photo © Kumarmani Mahakul,21 September 2017. All rights reserved.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Douglas Scotney 12 May 2020

good to read another of your poems inspired by a picture. Powerful alliteration in this one.

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Lamar Cole 12 May 2020

Great poem about first light.

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Indira Renganathan 18 July 2020

I can visualize this moment of sunrise and the poet who is easily inspired by the scenario to write the above poem in extreme excitement....a marvelous work Kumarmaniji....kudos

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Bharati Nayak 22 May 2020

Who are you oh painter? How are you smiling? Under the beneath of cracked cloud, From whom you have got power? - - - - -An amazing picture of a blissful morning has been depicted through your words.Thanks for sharing.

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Valsa George 20 May 2020

The first ray of light paints the dark earth and sky! The gleaming patterns it paints are wonderful to behold! In your mind's lens, you have captured the scene....! A beautiful picture strengthens your description!

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Khairul Ahsan 14 May 2020

A nice imagery of words on the 'First Light' and a nice graphic too at the end.

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 May 2020

" Smiley child of dawn" ! First Light of peace! ! Joy! Beauty of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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