Kumarmani Mahakul

Gold Star - 184,204 Points (Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA)

First Touch Of Winter - Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

This gives a feeling of life
With flow of season it comes
Slowly touches soft soil here
On Earth winter likes to play.

Giving a touch it teaches us
To be more aware about nature
There is glitter of tolerance
To have power to resist we see.

Winter sing's with first step
By command of time to flow
Slowly moves from mountain
And we welcome with flowers.

Scenic beauty sees clear sky
Drop of mist moves in mid say
Having this touch morning feels
First touch of winter is nice.

Topic(s) of this poem: life, winter


Comments about First Touch Of Winter by Kumarmani Mahakul

  • Edward Kofi Louis (3/4/2016 12:32:00 AM)


    First touch of love; with the muse of nature. Nice piece of work. (Report) Reply

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  • Paul Amrod (12/18/2015 10:50:00 AM)


    Hi Kumarmani, The feeling of winter as a new begin! The light comes more and more and a chance for a new beginning. Lovely, Greetings Paul- - Also this poem deserves a 10! ! (Report) Reply

  • (11/13/2015 3:53:00 AM)


    though we have no winter here but I can feel the touch after reading your poem
    thanks -10
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 12, 2015



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