First Touch Of Winter Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA

First Touch Of Winter

Rating: 5.0


This gives a feeling of life
With flow of season it comes
Slowly touches soft soil here
On Earth winter likes to play.

Giving a touch it teaches us
To be more aware about nature
There is glitter of tolerance
To have power to resist we see.

Winter sing's with first step
By command of time to flow
Slowly moves from mountain
And we welcome with flowers.

Scenic beauty sees clear sky
Drop of mist moves in mid say
Having this touch morning feels
First touch of winter is nice.

Thursday, November 12, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life,winter
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Walker 31 March 2019

In my country, the early signs of winter are there occasionally. Winter definitely makes me think more about nature-snowfalls, heavy rain. It's still a welcome season.

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Pushpendra Patel 19 February 2019

Drop of mist moves in mid say. First touch of winter motivates mind. This lovely poem entirely motivates mind.

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 March 2016

First touch of love; with the muse of nature. Nice piece of work.

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Paul Amrod 18 December 2015

Hi Kumarmani, The feeling of winter as a new begin! The light comes more and more and a chance for a new beginning. Lovely, Greetings Paul- - Also this poem deserves a 10! !

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Loke Kok Yee 13 November 2015

though we have no winter here but I can feel the touch after reading your poem thanks -10

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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