First Place Where I Meet My Beloved Poem by Indrajeet Mishra

First Place Where I Meet My Beloved

Rating: 4.8


Of the heart-touching beauty
I detect a sound sound
Which let all hatred to wither,
And brim in whole sorrounding so profound.
Shall it started elaborating,
I was being mesmerized,
And it felt all angels of heaven,
Gather and dance and being serenaded.
So far, Till my heart and eyes,
Could succeeded in gobbling that adoration,
I was standing quite like statue,
And when I come in sensation,
I found that it was that rendezvous,
Where I first met my Sweet-heart.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Payal Parande 09 November 2012

nice one...........i love it

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Ancita Michael 09 November 2012

very beautiful. thansk for sharing

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Chandra Thiagarajan 08 November 2012

Thanks for your kind invite. A nice poem with beautiful thought. K eep writing. Best wishes. Chandra Thiagarajan

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Ashmiya Thalvan 08 November 2012

GREAT imagination...keep on writingggg...4ever.....thnkzzz 4 the invitation......

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Sodoko Zavaki 08 November 2012

kewl. Thx for the invitation you sent me. This is a great poem with imaginary, good desribing words. I like it it's sweet =D

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Saheb Mohapatra 23 October 2014

a nice poem showing the beauty of romance........good use of words in the last four lines..........KEEP WRITING.

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Rose Flores 29 November 2012

a statue... is a clear metaphor of your poem. Thanks for sharing. Have a blessed day!

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Onyeme John 10 November 2012

That's a sweet memory on ink. Keep it up.

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Simon Odhiambo 10 November 2012

Very good and great thoughts...

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John Hayes 09 November 2012

True love and pure also, very nice!

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