Of the heart-touching beauty
I detect a sound sound
Which let all hatred to wither,
And brim in whole sorrounding so profound.
Shall it started elaborating,
I was being mesmerized,
And it felt all angels of heaven,
Gather and dance and being serenaded.
So far, Till my heart and eyes,
Could succeeded in gobbling that adoration,
I was standing quite like statue,
And when I come in sensation,
I found that it was that rendezvous,
Where I first met my Sweet-heart.
Thanks for your kind invite. A nice poem with beautiful thought. K eep writing. Best wishes. Chandra Thiagarajan
GREAT imagination...keep on writingggg...4ever.....thnkzzz 4 the invitation......
kewl. Thx for the invitation you sent me. This is a great poem with imaginary, good desribing words. I like it it's sweet =D
a nice poem showing the beauty of romance........good use of words in the last four lines..........KEEP WRITING.
a statue... is a clear metaphor of your poem. Thanks for sharing. Have a blessed day!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
nice one...........i love it