spiritual seeker

Rookie - 197 Points (22-11-55 / Malaysia)

Fishes In The Sea - Poem by spiritual seeker

Fishes in the sea,
In schools swimming gracefully,
Must they die of thirst?

Poet's Notes about The Poem

I wonder?

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  • (5/6/2013 1:03:00 AM)

    Merciful creator never leave any of His children to die of hunger and thirst; all are born to live and enjoy not to die. V Nice thought; same thought different in childhood, different now! Great poem in few lines, big 10+ (Report) Reply

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  • Hans Vr (4/30/2013 9:56:00 PM)

    Fantastic write. Makes me think of us craving for love while we literally are bathing in Our Creator's love all the time. Super-spiritual, my Sufi brother (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, April 29, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, May 1, 2013

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