Fizzle And Shine Poem by Evelyn Judy Buehler

Fizzle And Shine

Rating: 5.0


floating on water
red sun's come down to the sea
blue waves in motion

shimmer and shine dusk
and stars are racing the moon
beyond fiery skies

as the hour grows late
the smoky drapes also fall
full of bright embers

Fizzle And Shine
Wednesday, March 15, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: haiku,sunset,beauty,colors,sea,evening,fire
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Photo by Guilherme Gomes at Pixabay
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Feldman 15 March 2023

The most beautiful poetic portraits are painted by your deeply inspired Pen! Love this unique talent and art.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 15 March 2023

Reading your lovely comment is so rewarding and inspiring. Thank you.

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Anjandev Roy 16 March 2023

full of bright embers..... beautiful....

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 16 March 2023

Bravo, My dear Evelyn Such a lovely poem

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Nosheen Irfan 17 March 2023

Sterling imagery! Just awesome! Lots of beauty and imagination!

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Nabakishore Dash 16 March 2023

What an imagery? your poems are always filled with full imageries.

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M. Asim Nehal 16 March 2023

Outstanding chain of Haikus, brilliantly written. I can visualise the setting sun, moon and the night life.5******

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Pallavi Tripathi 16 March 2023

The vision reminds me of the poem that led to The Scream

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Dr Dillip K Swain 16 March 2023

Really a lovely poem dear poetess... liked it

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