Alavi Maliha

Flames - Poem by Alavi Maliha

Oh my, spread love
Don't let the flowers die tonight
Oh no, let it flow
Shade the tears up right
Teardrops under the shade of rain
Or the fire that's burning within
Let the flames turn out
Into the oblivion of nothing

Topic(s) of this poem: painful

Comments about Flames by Alavi Maliha

  • Dimitrios Galanis (5/30/2016 9:15:00 AM)

    Pleased to see here great poets to have a good word to say on your poesy, dear Alavi.Glad to see that I was not wrong estimating as great your talent. (Report) Reply

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  • Dev Anand (4/9/2016 1:32:00 AM)

    the fire that's burning within
    Let the flames turn out
    Into the oblivion of nothing - spread love........ a very fine poem dear poetess
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  • Dr.tony Brahmin (1/15/2016 12:56:00 PM)

    Spread love,
    dont let the flowers die
    Teardrops and fire, and rain.
    so many wonderful images coined up in a poem. lovely verses. thank you dear poetess. tony
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  • Chinedu Dike (11/1/2015 2:27:00 AM)

    Beautiful train of thought, well articulated, nicely encapsulated and insightfully penned in poetic diction with conviction. LET THE FLAMES TURN OUT INTO THE OBLIVION OF NOTHING - what a line! Thanks for sharing Alavi. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. (Report) Reply

  • Fabrizio Frosini (10/25/2015 3:44:00 PM)

    ''into the oblivion of nothing..''

    I like it..
    nicely penned, Alavi. Keep on writing
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    Alavi Maliha (10/25/2015 10:40:00 PM)

    Thank you :) It is the way I share my thoughts. :)

  • Souren Mondal (10/25/2015 8:47:00 AM)

    It's true sometimes we need to express our pains, but we fail miserable often... A well written poem Alavi.. Thanks for sharing.. (Report) Reply

    Alavi Maliha (10/25/2015 11:44:00 AM)

    my pleasure :) and thank you for your great admiring :)

  • Kelly Kurt (10/25/2015 3:23:00 AM)

    A nicely written piece, Alavi. Thanks (Report) Reply

    Alavi Maliha (10/25/2015 5:17:00 AM)

    thank you :)

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, October 25, 2015

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