Sunday, October 25, 2015

Flames Comments

Rating: 4.7

Oh my, spread love
Don't let the flowers die tonight
Oh no, let it flow
Shade the tears up right
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Alavi Maliha
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Dimitrios Galanis 30 May 2016

Pleased to see here great poets to have a good word to say on your poesy, dear Alavi.Glad to see that I was not wrong estimating as great your talent.

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Dev Anand 09 April 2016

the fire that's burning within Let the flames turn out Into the oblivion of nothing - spread love........ a very fine poem dear poetess

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Dr Antony Theodore 15 January 2016

Spread love, dont let the flowers die Teardrops and fire, and rain. so many wonderful images coined up in a poem. lovely verses. thank you dear poetess. tony

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Chinedu Dike 01 November 2015

Beautiful train of thought, well articulated, nicely encapsulated and insightfully penned in poetic diction with conviction. LET THE FLAMES TURN OUT INTO THE OBLIVION OF NOTHING - what a line! Thanks for sharing Alavi. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Fabrizio Frosini 25 October 2015

''into the oblivion of nothing..'' I like it.. nicely penned, Alavi. Keep on writing Blessings

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Alavi Maliha 25 October 2015

Thank you :) It is the way I share my thoughts. :)

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Souren Mondal 25 October 2015

It's true sometimes we need to express our pains, but we fail miserable often... A well written poem Alavi.. Thanks for sharing..

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Alavi Maliha 25 October 2015

my pleasure :) and thank you for your great admiring :)

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Kelly Kurt 25 October 2015

A nicely written piece, Alavi. Thanks

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Alavi Maliha 25 October 2015

thank you :)

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