Flawlessly Across The Floor Poem by Bernard F. Asuncion

Flawlessly Across The Floor

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F-lawlessly across the floor,
L-iving her life in purity;
O-n the way to glorious bliss,
R-eaching for the crown of glory.

A-part from dirt and grime,
T-rying her best to obey;
E-ven if one does her wrong,
N-ever ever does fault pay.
T-wentieth day of May, her home has no eye sore;
O-ne finds no mess in the hall, as he enters into the door.

A-mazing pictures on the wall
L-et one touch them even more;
A-lluring lady in white, walks flawlessly across the floor.

Thursday, September 22, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: birthday
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cheryl Tutaan 30 December 2018

An amazing acrostic, Bernard❤️❤️❤️

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Alam Sayed 30 May 2018

A nice poem handled with marvellous skills.

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Thank you so much, Alam for your fascinating feedback🙏🙏🙏

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Robert Murray Smith 30 May 2018

A wonderful birthday poem.++10

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Much thanks, Robert for your valuable support🙏🙏🙏

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Akhtar Jawad 22 April 2018

I was mesmerized, such a beautiful birthday poem.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 23 April 2018

Dear friend Akhtar, thanks for warm words of comment🙏🙏🙏

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