Fledglings Poem by Valsa George

Fledglings

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..........Shells cracked.........
.......Confines crashed.......
......As life thrust.........
........With feeble might.......

Fledgling were hatched
In stark nakedness matched
Quivering masses of flesh
Born into a world afresh

All they knew was a gnawing hunger
Failing to appease, they would go into danger
Each time they felt their mother beside
They would open their rose pink jaws wide
And something into their mouths would be stuffed
A worm or a berry she so thoughtfully clutched

Often the mother would fly away
Leaving the fledglings to have their way
Now and then she would come in speed
To feed her ravenous brood

With night fall, she would fly back to her nest
Letting them snooze under her wings tight
As days went by, they saw downy feathers grow
Giving their body and their wings a rare glow
They were no more ugly pieces of flesh
But young birdies with plumage fresh
They longed for the freedom of the sky
And like their mother, wanted to fly

No more willing to be shackled to the nest
They decided to take the final test
They sprang from the confines of their nest
Flexing their feathered wings and feet
And launching into the vastness of the sky
To immeasurable heights, they did fly

Fledglings
Thursday, June 22, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: birds
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Feldman 23 September 2017

I always wonder if once gone, the mother bird misses the children, she will never, probably, ever see again? Your poem is so well written it was like being there, feeling and seeing the evolution of the small ones growing and their tender scenes. It is remarkable how outstanding poems need not the visual. As in this case the poet's tender feelings and words express it all. A veritable joy!

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Valsa George 24 September 2017

Thank you so much Sandra for your very lovely comment! I am enthused!

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Laurie Van Der Hart 23 September 2017

A lovely description of this everyday miracle, Valsa. It's as good as a nature video! My uncle was a bird photographer. You may like to google some of his photos - try: Nico Myburgh bird photographs images.

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Valsa George 24 September 2017

Thank you so much Laurie...! Definitely I shall have a look at your uncle's photos!

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Akhtar Jawad 20 August 2017

A mother is a glimpse of the creator. A lovely poem by Valsa George, a daughter, a mother and by grace of Almighty is a lovely grandmother.

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Valsa George 20 August 2017

I haven't become a grandmother....! My sons are yet to be married as they are late arrivals to us! Thank you for your beautiful comment, Akhtarji!

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Loke Kok Yee 25 June 2017

The wonders of nature so beautifully expressed! Thanks Valsa.

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Valsa George 26 June 2017

Thank you Loke.... my ever encouraging friend......!

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Nosheen Irfan 25 June 2017

Beautiful piece of writing. From fragile, naked fledglings to soft feathery flying birds....how artfully you have unfolded their growth n journey. Wonderful observation. Well-worded. A delightful read. A10

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Valsa George 26 June 2017

Isn't it a pleasure watching the tiny creatures of Nature.....? I enjoy watching birds! Thank you so much Nosheen for your delightful comment!

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