Rini Shibu

Gold Star - 95,150 Points (1978 / India)

Flutter In The Breeze - Poem by Rini Shibu

The light inside me started to glow
As the love upon me you bestowed
Freshness that lasts long
Fragrance that goes beyond
The expectation you have never thought of
Showers on you without any cause
Blossoms of life flourish lifetime
A garden for you not just at springtime
Where you flutter in the breeze
And this feel I wish to never cease

Topic(s) of this poem: love and life


Comments about Flutter In The Breeze by Rini Shibu

  • Jagdish Singh RamánaJagdish Singh Ramána (3/17/2020 12:23:00 AM)

    Beautiful imagery.
    " Where you flutter in the breeze
    And this feel I wish to never cease" , such a beautiful and poetic expression.
    Loved reading this.
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  • Captain CurCaptain Cur (2/14/2020 4:52:00 PM)

    A lovely write! I can feel the love you have written fluttering in a breeze of words. (Report)Reply

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  • Akhtar JawadAkhtar Jawad (2/8/2020 8:07:00 AM)

    Anyone who is love flutters in its breeze birds flutter through their wings, a woman uses her silky hairs and man waiting for some more eclairs. (Report)Reply

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  • Savita TyagiSavita Tyagi (2/8/2020 7:32:00 AM)

    Lovely poem so full of love and its expetations. Very poetic expressions. (Report)Reply

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  • Mahtab BangaleeMahtab Bangalee (2/4/2020 9:33:00 PM)

    the breeze of spring
    coming and coming
    awakening the heart of love
    thoroughly
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  • Robert Murray SmithRobert Murray Smith (2/4/2020 8:12:00 PM)

    A flutter of breeze is all that is needed. A nice poem Rini. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, February 4, 2020

Poem Edited: Tuesday, February 4, 2020


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