Rini Shibu

Gold Star - 95,150 Points (1978 / India)

Flying Through The Sky - Poem by Rini Shibu

Flying higher and higher to the sky
The sky where birds never flew
Gliding on the wings like a fairy
Soar above the mountains and the ocean
The enchanting beauty of earth
The amazing view I see from the aircraft
The magnificent scene of the sun set
The red and orange rays scattered
The clouds are like cotton candy
Draping the bright blue sky
And in soft background music
Am in thoughts of my hometown and parents.

Topic(s) of this poem: home, journey, parents, vacation


Comments about Flying Through The Sky by Rini Shibu

  • Geeta Radhakrishna MenonGeeta Radhakrishna Menon (1/22/2018 11:19:00 AM)

    And in soft background music
    Am in thoughts of my hometown and parents.

    It always happens. the farther you go away from home, the more you think of it.
    Nice little poem that has a soothing nostalgia!
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    Rini Shibu(1/23/2018 10:57:00 AM)

    Thanks a lot Geeta for posting your remarks! !

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  • Subhas Chandra ChakraSubhas Chandra Chakra (8/23/2017 8:18:00 AM)

    The red and orange rays scattered
    The clouds are like cotton candy
    Draping the bright blue sky

    You are capable of rendering a feeling someone has not yet felt ever!
    Nice poem dear poetess.
    Keep flying and keep rendering poems of eternal pleasure.
    10 for it.
    Subhas
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    Rini ShibuRini Shibu(8/23/2017 1:35:00 PM)

    Thanks subhas for your encouraging words

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  • Dr Tony BrahminDr Tony Brahmin (7/10/2017 4:12:00 PM)

    Flying higher and higher to the sky
    The sky where birds never flew...
    You are flying where birds cannot fly.
    in the beautiful, serence, peaceful and loving atmosphere
    thinking of the hometown.... and parents in a nostalgic mood.
    a sense of loss, joy and innocence that you enjoyed in the childhood,
    the nearness, love and concern of all whom you love.... very nice poem.
    thank you. tony
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    Rini ShibuRini Shibu(7/10/2017 10:43:00 PM)

    Thank you so much Tony

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  • Unwritten SoulUnwritten Soul (7/8/2017 9:38:00 AM)

    This is very sweet, to fly with pure thought is the lightest and the enjoyable flight to ever have...
    Dream means to be true and sweet, this must be a dream then, but keep dreaming till it be true :)
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    Rini ShibuRini Shibu(7/8/2017 12:50:00 PM)

    Thanks Soul..

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  • Jazib KamalviJazib Kamalvi (7/2/2017 10:53:00 PM)

    A beautiful imagery. Thank you (Report)Reply

    Rini ShibuRini Shibu(7/2/2017 11:25:00 PM)

    Thank you Jazib
    Rini

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  • Lamar Cole (7/2/2017 4:25:00 PM)

    This is an absolutely wonderful poem with beautiful imagery as seen from an airplane. Riding in an airplane makes us one with the sky. (Report)Reply

    Rini ShibuRini Shibu(7/2/2017 11:24:00 PM)

    Thanks a lot Lam

    Rini

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  • Unnikrishnan E S (7/1/2017 11:30:00 AM)

    HI Rini,

    Soaring in the sky, people usually look still upwards. Want to soar still higher. To bring more worlds under their feet. Looking down from that height (Figuratively) is a great feat. Rooting the feet still on firm earth is!

    On the other hand, the beauty of nature seen from the skies, is definitely a fantastic experience. Many travels; many places; many worlds; but the greatest experience is seeing the Kerala shores from the skies. Sure it is.

    Beautiful poem. a perfect ten...
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    Rini ShibuRini Shibu(7/2/2017 9:04:00 AM)

    Thank you so much Mr.Unni

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, July 1, 2017

Poem Edited: Saturday, July 1, 2017


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