Fluctuations Poem by Rini Shibu

Fluctuations

Rating: 4.3


When energy drains
You feel powerless
When power fluctuates
and so the light
Though you are in the light
You witness dark
Life is complex
If your pulse goes weak
fun fluctuates
And you are less creative

Saturday, June 16, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Lovely poem Rini 10 + Thank you for sharing Mario Odekerken

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Robert Murray Smith 16 June 2018

Rini, the power within is powerful, turn it on.++10

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Unnikrishnan E S 13 July 2018

Lovely poem, Rini.10

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Captain Cur 30 June 2018

Absolutely true! At times I feel the need to plug myself back into the electrical socket and give myself a jolt. What is life without energy and fun. A nice spark to your poem, as I read I feel the desire to turn the switch back on and of course have a little fun.

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Hans Vr 30 June 2018

So true, Rini, Life seems a succession of ups and downs. When we are in a state of flow, all we need is a place in nature and we connect effortlessly to our Source. If we are in one of these lowish fluctuations, whatever we do, the connection does not seem to work. These are the times, when a good book tends to help me up a bit :) . Excellent poem!

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Akhtar Jawad 22 June 2018

If your pulse goes weak fun fluctuates And you are less creativ and write funny limericks.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 17 June 2018

Life is complex If your pulse goes weak fun fluctuates And you are less creative.......so touching and true. A beautiful poem with nice ideology. Thank u Rini.

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