Flying Kite Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Flying Kite

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With the wings of love
Riding on my enthusiasm
The life kite flies high up in the sky

Hope takes it high
Courage makes it fly
My hard work on the ground stays

O wind you are free to test
I promise, will rise with each blow
Till my patience is with me

O clouds please wait
Let me go past you
Under your darkness I can't fly

O rainbow I love your colors
Let me touch it and let me feel it
All my flying is for you.

Thursday, December 17, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: kite,life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Darren Jkoeryo 21 December 2015

Amazing poem, Liked it Man....10

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M Asim Nehal 13 October 2018

Thx DJ .

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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 December 2015

Riding enthusiasm with wings of of love and flying kite takes life in to new abode. Very fantastically drafted poem shared definitely.10

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Edward Kofi Louis 18 December 2015

Hope is the light ahead of mankind. Nice work.

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Kelly Kurt 17 December 2015

A hopeful, joyful and fun poem, Mohammed. Thanks

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Rajnish Manga 17 December 2015

Really an amazing poem. Life is like a kite which goes up high in the sky when elements of hard work, love, hope, courage and patience provide the necessary impetus and sublimation to it. Thanks, Md. Asim ji.

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