Font Color=darkvioleta Dream Poem by Jane Meyer

Font Color=darkvioleta Dream

Rating: 5.0


I was dreaming,
dreaming of a poem.
It was about a couple,
a man and woman dancing.
The stanzas were OK,
nothing too impressive.
But then there were the last four lines,
the most beautiful I’ve heard.
And I only wish I could remember,
what it is they were.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
~ Jon London ~ 08 July 2009

And in a blink the vision was gone...but the feeling remains....great piece Jane...keep exploring my lovely 10

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William Breland 30 September 2009

A dream is sometimes the key to our inner self's desire.. to remember what they were, is to be what they are.. and from the outside looking in, seems that you have that dream quite alot.. no worries though, your dream shall come true, and you get closer to that trueness each time you open your heart instead of your eyes... : -) Very well left off! ! 10++++ bravo! ! ! your friend in poetry: William... he he he <--- thas me...

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Sonya Florentino 09 August 2009

the lost poems...yes, they're some of the best.... but don't be surprised, sometimes they come back....and better!

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HaZeM PaKKaR 06 August 2009

Wow.. It's really charming & fascinating.. You've truly expressed your talent, Using very well chosen words.. Please, let me know about your new piece!

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Adi Cox 09 July 2009

I am with you on this poem. I thought up some lines for a poem and then before I wrote them down I had forgotten them. These lines became the best lines I had ever thought up. After racking my brains I remembered the lines and suddenly they were not that special. I like this poem.10/10.

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Nikunj Sharma 09 July 2009

its mystical, imaginitve and wonderful.... do read two of my poems called Lets dream and My dream.... also read Hold a mirror.... and dont worry about names.... whats in a name? ? ? ?

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