I was dreaming,
dreaming of a poem.
It was about a couple,
a man and woman dancing.
The stanzas were OK,
nothing too impressive.
But then there were the last four lines,
the most beautiful I’ve heard.
And I only wish I could remember,
what it is they were.
A dream is sometimes the key to our inner self's desire.. to remember what they were, is to be what they are.. and from the outside looking in, seems that you have that dream quite alot.. no worries though, your dream shall come true, and you get closer to that trueness each time you open your heart instead of your eyes... : -) Very well left off! ! 10++++ bravo! ! ! your friend in poetry: William... he he he <--- thas me...
the lost poems...yes, they're some of the best.... but don't be surprised, sometimes they come back....and better!
Wow.. It's really charming & fascinating.. You've truly expressed your talent, Using very well chosen words.. Please, let me know about your new piece!
I am with you on this poem. I thought up some lines for a poem and then before I wrote them down I had forgotten them. These lines became the best lines I had ever thought up. After racking my brains I remembered the lines and suddenly they were not that special. I like this poem.10/10.
its mystical, imaginitve and wonderful.... do read two of my poems called Lets dream and My dream.... also read Hold a mirror.... and dont worry about names.... whats in a name? ? ? ?
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
And in a blink the vision was gone...but the feeling remains....great piece Jane...keep exploring my lovely 10