Font Color=darkvioletsuicide Note Poem by Jane Meyer

Font Color=darkvioletsuicide Note

Rating: 4.7


(Let me warn you that this is totally not real. I don't plan on killing myself and I don't even live with my mom anymore. I don't know what caused my to write this, but...here it is.)

The world wasn’t cruel to me,
but one person was.

My life was worth living,
but not around her.

I couldn’t take it anymore,
the pain,
the intensity,
the stress
the confusion.

Sure it was only a week at a time,
but every other week,
was enough to drive me mad.

One week I’m in heaven,
happy, loved, living my life.

The next I’m in hell,
miserable, forsaken, wishing I were dead.

I couldn’t take it anymore,
and I made my decision.
I know that it was selfish,
but I need the eternal peace.

I don’t know what I’m throwing away,
I don’t know what life I could have had.
And I don’t care,
nothing is worth living through this.

I’m sorry I had to go,
but understand I had to,
understand I’m sorry,
and understand this is goodbye.

Forever.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
HaZeM PaKKaR 29 September 2009

i've read it.. & i had this cold chill.. but i have to say: '' it's an attractive piece with an attractive title ''.. i think that the most important part is the topic note you have written.. the whole piece is like a monologue someone may say to him/herself after having a very bad day while looking at the dark sky from the window before sleeping.. i like it because i'm sure you will not do it (being suicided) .. thanks4sharing! !

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Adam Pinheiro 27 September 2009

very nice poem. i get sudden urges to write thingsd too, even if ui don't mean the messages: P. weird how that works. but im curious as to how u got some of your words italicized, i thought we culdnt use html? ? ?

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Aparna Sinha 27 September 2009

Thanks to the disclaimer... what a write! ! I am so thrilled

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Darlric John Lotik 27 September 2009

so emotional peculiar piece of art well crafted, well penned the poem drive me too excellent

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