Footfalls Of An Impervious Lover Poem by Captain Cur

Footfalls Of An Impervious Lover

Rating: 5.0


Fantastically large, the grass fed rills
winded lazily through a mountain pass,
row upon row of bright eyed daffodils
in luxuriant natural grandeur
climbed along the southern ridge, a yellow mass
interspersed with hints of pink, radiant whites;
their spirited colors, their sweet forms cast
along the ledges hanging from on high
down through the valley beneath an envious sky.

As if the sun's evening rays were sprinkled
with the uncontrolled beauty of the place
there stood a rock mouthed cave, huge, unwrinkled
where water leapt to smooth its ageless face
currents entering slow in tranquil grace,
rolling, turning, reforming from the deep,
tossing round an ever widening base;
like supplicants lapping at their master's feet
flowing into the stillness of hypnotic sleep.

What then dwells inside the cavern's cover,
between the falls, its stone heart echo beating
footfalls of an impervious lover
approaching, rising from the jetting springs
shimmering waves in eternal pleading
imprisoned within the submerging cell
in one last gasp, perpetually repeating
sensual fragments of this grandiose spell
the waters of his strength in adoration fell.

Thursday, September 6, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: beauty,mystical love,natural
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Envisioning a mystical setting and the interplay between the elements of nature.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kostas Lagos 06 September 2018

Well, this is a sensational poem! 10!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 September 2018

Fantastically large the grass fed rills swing when wind blows and this amazes mind. Sun's evening rays sprinkled on this give gentle feelings of golden appearance. Inside the cavern's cover hypnotic sleep dazzles. Mystical natural love is beautifully expressed in this excellent poem. A great imagery is drawn through perception...10

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Rini Shibu 06 September 2018

Beautiful imagery..enjoyed reading

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