Does Poetry More Fulfill Your Mind Poem by Captain Cur
Does Poetry More Fulfill Your Mind
If in thy youth were made to find
poetry more fulfilled your mind
than machinations or the rest
consider your soul doubly blest.
So let us not speak ill of verse
recite each line, rehearse, rehearse!
Do words flow smooth like in a dream
or struggle hard to swim upstream?
When writing do poems seem to drown
when reading tumble to the ground;
just rhyme these two words, light and bright,
and everything will be alright.
The finer themes that lift the scene
the ocean blue, the forest green
but, if sensitivities lack,
it's okay to compose in black.
Let's mix a cauldron full of verse
add love, prayer, a little curse
then strip the finished product bare
with plays of Shakespeare to compare.
The sweeping rhymes that end the line,
the anapests that drill to time,
if these techniques you do possess
consider your soul triple blessed!
Then edit, check and check some more
for all your heart you did outpour.
The end.
Loved. This. Poem. No wonder your lines flow! ! Do words flow smooth like in a dream or struggle hard to swim upstream? If sometimes poems do seem to drown when reading tumble to the ground- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -You been standing behind me while I sit at my desk struggling with recalcitrant lines and runaway words? ? ? Thank you for this encouraging poem, Captain o Captain. ;)
A great poem with wonderful tips for writing poem.----' When writing do poems seem to drown when reading tumble to the ground; just rhyme these two words, light and bright, and everything will be alright.'
2) the ocean blue, the forest green but, if sensitivities lack, it's okay to compose in black. Loveliest end rhymes in thy poetry, Captain Sir!
1) I recite the beautiful core of thy poetry, Captain Cur: When writing do poems seem to drown when reading tumble to the ground; just rhyme these two words, light and bright, and everything will be alright. The finer themes that lift the scene
Oh, How awesome! .. Beautiful thoughts, beautifully written! .. Again such true poetry of beautiful thought and beautiful rhyme! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++
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4/29/2025 10:21:53 PM # 1.0.0
Thank captain.. This lesson I will keep in mind
may sweetness always fill your mind! Thanks Rini.