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For The Man That I Love

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Write me a song for the man that I love
Say, could his heart be mine?
There as I stare the world far away
All that I see can't say

Over the seas, mountains and trees
Oceans of hope and lies
All that I wish, all that I long
All that he can't disguise

Write me a song for the man that I love
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Saturday, January 16, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: i love,man,song,write
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 29 March 2020

Well expressed thoughts and feelings, very passionate with strong emotions.. Powerfully and movingly penned from the heart. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Thank you very much for your kind words! ! I'm glad you liked it! Thank you!

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Bharati Nayak 11 August 2017

Write me a song for the man that I love Say, could his heart be mine? There as I stare the world far away All that I see can't say- - - - - - - - - - - - A fine expression of restless heart, being away from the lover, questioning oneself- Does he love me? Does he know my love for him? How I wish he knew my love? Oh sky, oh river, oh wind, just tell him about my love. Perhaps this poem inspired Daniel Brick to write A Song for the Man I love.

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Thank you so very much for your beautiful words, dear Bharati Nayak! ! Thank you! ! Thank you for notifying me for the wonderful poem of dear Daniel Brick! ! If it is indeed inspired by my poem, I'm so very honoured, moved, blessed and happy! ! Thank you! !

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Saadat Tahir 12 February 2017

you almost tempted me into writing a poem... :) quite a tantalizing and appealing poem... a nit of a dilemma... but thats what life is... there is bit of intensity...a bit of wistfulness.. a bit of feminine restraint...and yes... a bit of red...thumbs contextually and content wise... poetic and nicely put... liked

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Thank you for you comment! ! Happy you liked my poem! Thank you! !

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Preston Mwiinga 03 September 2016

A cute piece I wish my woman would dedicate such a piece to me

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Preston Mwiinga 06 September 2016

You are very welcome. we are here to support one another

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Thank you! ! ! :) Very happy you liked it! !

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Ajay Kumar Adarsh 22 August 2016

A beautiful poem for love....! Poem represents the heat of poet/poetess..... It showing that how much strong is ur feeling for the things(love, emotions, etc...) you have written a lovely poem for your love......I really enjoyed it....! Best of Luck....

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