For Their Sake's... Poem by Rebecca Navarre

For Their Sake's...

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Here we go again, touch and go
with my sin. Round and round we
bend. Then lay it down for a friend.
When does it ever end. What kinda
message does this send. When will I
be able to break, this terrible
mistake...Gotta speak up, can't wait.
Before it's to late! ! ! ! ! It's more than
just my fate! ! ! ! ! What happens in the end.
If I keep giving in. If I bend.. We both
could break! Oh, Lord keep me straight!
So much more at stake, so much more beyond
just me! How do I make them see... What it
could do to you and me! ! ! ! ! Do to family! ! ! ! !
Down on my Knee's don't let me take. That
sip of sa-ke. Help me Lord this promise to
make! ! ! ! ! Remind me how I wish... my loved ones
to wake! .... Please don't let me partake,
For Their Sake! ! ! ! !

Thursday, November 30, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: addiction,alcohol
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I wrote this quite awhile ago, in
concerns to how i used to be with
drinking. Got to Believe...One step
at a time can make a difference! ! ! ! !
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 30 November 2017

Please don't let me partake. Addiction provokes thought entirely. Here we go again, touch and go with sin that provokes thought. Cleaning sin is wise ever. Lord definitely keeps us straight in righteousness. A brilliant poem is excellently penned.10

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Rebecca Navarre 01 December 2017

Thank You! ! ! Kumarmani, For Such A Kind And Thoughtful Reply! ! ! ! ! Your Poetry Ever So Beautifully Speaks! ! ! ! ! Of Spirituality Painted So Deep! ! ! ! Into Your Readers Heart It Does Reach! ! ! ! ! Touch And Teach! ! ! ! ! Thank You Again Ever So Much! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! And Smiles! ! ! ! !

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