For You And Me! .. Poem by Rebecca Navarre

For You And Me! ..

Rating: 5.0


The stars and the tree's.. All the beauty,
that we see.. That suddeness, of the breeze..
A lonely chick a dee, singing out so strong,
yet hopefully.. The trinity, with the mystery..
The rainbow, behind the clouded sea's.. Is God,
trying to reach out, and comfort you and me! ..

All that he created is to show..
That he loves us so! ..

Tuesday, September 4, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: comforting,creation,god,loving
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 07 September 2018

Absolutely a wow of a poem! ! ! Thank you! ! ! ! I will try to give you a 10 but I have noticed that PH prefers to dump a thousand ads in the scroll in front of the voting booth and then the scroll is so long you cannot get it to stand still long enough to vote before it gets submerged by ads again. Just know this is a brilliant starry eyed sky full of 10's to me! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Rebecca Navarre 08 September 2018

Thank you! .. Susan :) For your beautiful words and reply! .. Your pen paints such beauty and heart, that touches and inspires in ever word and every part, like a beautiful painting, like such beautiful art! .. Ever so many blessings dear! .. Hopefully.. they'll get these add things.. cleaned up? ...

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Unnikrishnan E S 05 September 2018

Hi Becca, Lovely poem..... The rainbow behind the clouded seas.... Wonderful image. So hearteningly novel...loved it. Yes in these words, this imagery, I do see Him... It is Him....100

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Rebecca Navarre 08 September 2018

Thank you! .. Unnikrishnan, For such a beautifully kind reply! .. :) Your poetry, with such heart and beauty does speak, flowing so deep into the hearts of readers that read! .. Ever so many blessings! ..

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 September 2018

Stars beautify the sky. Trees beautify life on this land. Rainbow sprinkles light of colour. God's grace reaches up to us through nature. Loving attitude is felt well. A brilliant poem is interestingly penned...10

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Rebecca Navarre 08 September 2018

Thank you! .. Kumarmani, For your beautifully thoughtful and kind reply! .. Your poems are ever so beautifully inspiring as, of God and nature your words echo and sing! .. Ever so many blessings! ..

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