Monday, March 3, 2008

For Things Will Never Be Same Again Comments

Rating: 5.0

There lies a space within my heart that shall remain so empty,
As sadly now our days are at an end,
I know I never shall forget the time we spent together,
It is so hard to lose your dearest friend.
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ANDREW BLAKEMORE
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Abha Sharma 24 March 2008

Find freedom now across the barren plain, And spend your days in happiness yet you I shall remember, For things will never be the same again ...................... the poem is so sweet that any one who reads would connect to it....liked it...

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Ernestine Northover 04 March 2008

I just love the last line of each verse, it just finishes off the poem beautifully. Mournful perhaps, but beauty is not always a happy thing. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Ann Beard 03 March 2008

Lovely but oh! so sad. the more we love the more we hurt.

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Duncan Wyllie 03 March 2008

This reminds me of Mike Oldfeilds Moonlight Shadow, eitherway both beautifully pieces of poetry YOU JUST HANG IN THERE MY FRIEND AND HANG IN STRONG! ! ! LISTENING? Love duncan X

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