Forbidden Fruit Poem by Khairul Ahsan

Khairul, I simply loved this poem...Forbidden things have an appeal of their own just because they are forbidden...

I like this its lighthearted and forbidden fruit is always tempting.Nice poem Khairul enjoyed reading.

so tempting.......................as if something is better than nothing

We are still paying for Adam and Eve's transgressions. Better safe than sorry. All of us have temptaciones and we cannot blame the serpent all the time. Your poem is so explicit and flows beautifully making us feel your sentiments so vividly and well expressed. You captivate the reader with your poetic blend.of give but can't take. Very good work.

Fantastic poem, but a humorous one too. Though this poem looks humorous, it has a in-depth meaning. My Guru can be taken as ones inner feelings. Initially Guru or my inner thoughts draw a line...but as the time went on, the person feelings changes. I think it this way....Comments can vary from person to person. I really loved the way you presented it.

@Violet Winters I really liked your thoughtful words, so beautifully spoken! I am glad to know you liked my poem. I am truly inspired.

Now, this I really liked! Benign defiance... always better to ask forgiveness than permission and love is always a forgiveable offense.

@ Amitava Sur Thank you very much for reading my poem and sharing your thoughts. Yes, grooming is very important in one's life. You've rightly said so.

A nice penning expressing the state of conscience. Khairul - personally I believe... that person is fortunate enough who is properly groomed. This grooming itself guides a person to build his/her conscience. Ultimately...... you are the Lord, you are the slave of you yourself

@Lorraine Colon, Thanks for reading my poem. Thanks for sharing your thoughts. Thanks for interpreting the poem so aptly.