Forever Free Poem by Jemarie Ragudo

Free as the wind love that is! A 10.

Imprison love within the Fragile walls of his heart For the eyes will reveal What the lips Are loathed to tell i loved the words, beaytiful way for telling the strong emotions.

Imprison love within the Fragile walls of his heart For the eyes will reveal What the lips Are loathed to tell i loved the words, beaytiful way for telling the strong emotions.

Short, clear, assured-this poem is very nicely done indeed! The graceful, natural flow that Patrick McF noted, combined with the tight, taut economical use of words and images that impressed James McL, make 'Forever Free' one of your best and move it into the genuinely memorable realm. Talk about good things in little packages! I'm not surprised by the numerous 10s and the many positive reader comments, to which I'm adding my own enthusiastic thumbs-up. Bravo, Jemarie! (P.S. I think you meant to write 'are loathe' or 'have loathed (?) to agree with lips plural, rather than 'is loathed' in the last line. Or am I missing something there?) Best wishes, Chuck Toll

wow, i guess the walls of heart as u said are raally fragile to love.....love can easily break them....well thats my context....for ur poem...its really great and i enjoyed it...thanks

Truly a great poem. For all the social control that we exert, our nature escapes, and we ARE our nature.

Marvelous poem. I had to read it several times to appreciate all of what it said and enjoy the weaving of the message. It seems like we are forever free in the sense that we will and can find a way.

are we free................no..............we are not.............

And this is what I call a 'slam-dunk' of a poem... wow! I really love this one... that is exquisite writing, beautiful lady! Hugs, Lee

Jemarie, it is perfect! You wrote a perfect poem, I'm in awe.10/10