Forever Free Poem by Jemarie Ragudo

Forever Free

Rating: 5.0


We can bind the wind
With cords of fantasy
And keep it still
For a moment
But never can man
In his shrewdness
Imprison love within the
Fragile walls of his heart
For the eyes will reveal
What the lips
Are loathed to tell

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sallie Howson 13 November 2007

brilliant poem..i love it

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Blue angel Florida 13 November 2007

I agree with Sallie bellow, 'brilliant poem', choice of words and meaning. Lovely!

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Dwayne Bailey 14 November 2007

lovely poem excellant words and very well spoken! Thanks for sharing. A 10 for sure

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Sherry Arzish 15 November 2007

its a beautiful poem i must say.

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Elmer Romulo Valdez 20 November 2007

Indeed love can't be tied down. Instead, it needs to be free in order that it can give inspiration and hope...

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Willis Martyn 19 July 2008

Truly a great poem. For all the social control that we exert, our nature escapes, and we ARE our nature.

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Ben Gieske 18 June 2008

Marvelous poem. I had to read it several times to appreciate all of what it said and enjoy the weaving of the message. It seems like we are forever free in the sense that we will and can find a way.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 23 March 2008

are we free................no..............we are not.............

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Lee Degnan 27 November 2007

And this is what I call a 'slam-dunk' of a poem... wow! I really love this one... that is exquisite writing, beautiful lady! Hugs, Lee

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Atsiylah Garfinkel 24 November 2007

Jemarie, it is perfect! You wrote a perfect poem, I'm in awe.10/10

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