Forever Good Poem by Jayne Louise Davies

Forever Good

Rating: 5.0


Those long lost days,
So young and free,
The many times,
We grazed our knees,
Memories of the old school yard,
Looking back,
Life was hard,
We played outside,
In Winter chill,
But they were good times,
I remember them still,
And I'd go back,
In a flash if I could,
They were the best days,
Forever good.

Jayne Louise Davies

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Esselebor Ebhojie 27 May 2022

Sweet nostalgia is a treasure

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Richard Wlodarski 28 May 2022

As a young teenager, we lived across the street from a playground. My parents couldn't tear us away from that great joy in our lives. So many thx, Jayne for bringing back the memories!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 28 May 2022

Simply a joy to read them especially this one Bravo!

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Thank you so much LeeAnn x So glad you liked it x

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Jayne Louise Davies 28 May 2022

Thanks everyone for your kind comments x

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Anil Kumar Panda 27 May 2022

Wish I could go back to the old school days, carefree and full of fun. Nice write.

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Chinedu Dike 27 May 2022

Lovely and very passionate rendition. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched..

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Jayne Louise Davies

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Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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