Forever His Eyes Can See Poem by Marieta Maglas

Forever His Eyes Can See

Rating: 5.0


Painting a portrait with hidden beauty,
Portraiture means, sometimes,
silent poetry,
And other times means blossoming flowers.
Poetical words like flowers.
His tears were like drops of rain,
tears in the rain.


Sweet thoughts are coming to light.
Become a creative and insightful reality.


His malignant fever means writing poems,
Creative obsessions and music,
shining dreams in the night.
Make the weight of his loneliness creep inside.

Behind his soul's door,
always the loving souls
Can hear his musical notes...

His poetical lines are sometimes immense.
Make the readers find new thoughts.
Need to see the eyes of the Father,
In a place where
All souls stand as equals,
And where forever the eyes can see.....

Poem by Marieta Maglas

Dedicated to our poet Eyan Desir

Monday, March 22, 2010
Topic(s) of this poem: dedication
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ion Untaru 30 March 2010

painting, is another kind of poetry 'Feeling the weight of loneliness creeping inside.' very nice indeed,10+

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Beauty Philosophy 30 March 2010

An outstanding poem full of imagination and talent.

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Emma Adamyan 28 March 2010

an unusual idea got on my mind... poetry sometimes like a pastry, the final result depends on to whom u make/dedicate it. he is a very good poet, deserves a poem like this 10/10. fine work

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Chitra - 26 March 2010

a wonderful protrait of creativity and resonant imagery! A picture-perfect decication!

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Allemagne Roßmann 26 March 2010

You have fulfilled a noble wish of dedication ! Being a witness testifying the truth Showing the highest degree of honesty! - we are witnesses and i witnessed it too.

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Ratnakar Rout 30 April 2010

Really a good composition.Worth reading.Thanks for inviting me to read your nice poem.

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Clara Odelia Ciutara 20 April 2010

Mary, this poem is very nice of you... You hv a truly wonderful idea, yeah - for every time his eyes see-. Lovely poem

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Nora Eason 14 April 2010

What an awesome poem. Beautiful.

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Leah Ayliffe 05 April 2010

Very insightful and beautifully written

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yellowbell alamanda 31 March 2010

This is very true! Like marieta, Eyan creativity in words is channeling and Marieta is always surprising. this is a very good one, as a dedication to a deserving one. Have a nice day! Thanks for inviting.

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Marieta Maglas

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Radauti, Judet Suceava, Romania
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