Forgetting My Dream Poem by Emily Angel

Forgetting My Dream

Rating: 4.8


A beautiful dream you are,
Yet I know not what to do.
My heart is in a tumult.
I die for an answer.

Truth, yes, it’s bitter
But let me at least know
The bitterness that should be.
Can’t see through this fog
Or breath in this flood.

I feel like a fish
Gasping for breath on land.
I took shelter in
The dark of the night
Seeking refuge from
My disturbing enemy.

Little did I know
My worst enemy was
Inside of my brain.
It had captured my
Thoughts and my dreams.

And I, its pathetic victim
Have no way out.
I begged and whined
But to no effect.

I try forgetting you,
My dream so beautiful.
Yet, you turned out to be
Too beautiful to be
Forsaken forever.

Friday, July 15, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: fog,seeking
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abdallah Gamal 16 July 2011

very nice poem have great emotions and beautiful imagination, , nice work, , sry I did'ny find a rate more than 10++

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 15 July 2011

Nice poem composed with vivid imagery. I liked the theme very much. Kudos to your skill. Keep it up. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... I shall be highly obliged if you please read and rate my poem 'A busy street' on page 1. Warmest regards Akmal

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David Tremain 02 August 2011

Interesting psychological depth to a common experience. Promising :)

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Young Church Poetry 29 July 2011

Beautiful poem, well written. 'Too beautiful to be forsaken forever' how amazing, beautiful work.

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Matthew C. L. Pratt 22 July 2011

A very elegant use of both light and shade. Well done.

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Hans Vr 22 July 2011

So nicely written. Full of emotion. Dreams are there to be realised. We cannot realise them all however. Keep on dreaming, I am sure reality will be on your side soon.

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Nice poem, so real the words are well chose. And i love the setting....

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