Am In Love. Poem by DICKSON MSETI

Am In Love.

Rating: 3.8

ooh people this is it,
i, v found that wonderful beat,
now it's lucky i stay tight,

just behind the mountain,
where my colorful tears accelerated,
neither laughter nor i felt pain,
just my eyes were cheated.

Robin Machorro 05 June 2010

this was very good i liked it alot :))

0 0 Reply
Crystal Bradley 08 June 2010

Very creative and nicely worded.

0 0 Reply
Pranab K Chakraborty 11 June 2010

neither loughter nor i felt pain, just my eyes were cheated. This feeling can not not be purchased within a pouch at any super market. Only poetry give us chance to be cheated many times in a full life. Colourful or colourless tears give it acceleration. Tears but dropp not. Thank you poet, you have drawn your feelings with poetic skill. 10+ Apoet Bangla

0 0 Reply
Samweli Butobi 01 January 2012

where my colouf tears accelerated.....just my eyes were cheated the sound of the verses gives the silence of the voice where we find the beat echos thanks

1 1 Reply
Charles Jagongo Ogola 23 August 2011

Just my eyes were cheated. (I like this line)

0 1 Reply
Marcus Mckinley 04 August 2010

good inmagery in this poem. nicely done

0 0 Reply
Dr Antony Theodore 30 July 2010

i, ve found that wonderful beat, colourful tears ? ? ? ? behiind the mountain. no pain no joy. no laughter.... Verx y creative expressions and colourful imagination. thank you, just my eyes were cheated.

0 0 Reply
Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 13 July 2010

‘just behind the mountain, where my colorful tears accelerated, ’ ~ fine imagery in flavor of somber and highs of mountains… Thanks for sharing… Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10 PS Tears will make thousand rills... n

0 0 Reply
Error Success