ooh people this is it,
i, v found that wonderful beat,
now it's lucky i stay tight,
just behind the mountain,
where my colorful tears accelerated,
neither laughter nor i felt pain,
just my eyes were cheated.
Very creative and nicely worded.
this was very good i liked it alot :))
where my colouf tears accelerated.....just my eyes were cheated the sound of the verses gives the silence of the voice where we find the beat echos thanks
Just my eyes were cheated. (I like this line)
good inmagery in this poem. nicely done
i, ve found that wonderful beat, colourful tears ? ? ? ? behiind the mountain. no pain no joy. no laughter.... Verx y creative expressions and colourful imagination. thank you, just my eyes were cheated.
‘just behind the mountain, where my colorful tears accelerated, ’ ~ fine imagery in flavor of somber and highs of mountains… Thanks for sharing… Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10 PS Tears will make thousand rills... n
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
neither loughter nor i felt pain, just my eyes were cheated. This feeling can not not be purchased within a pouch at any super market. Only poetry give us chance to be cheated many times in a full life. Colourful or colourless tears give it acceleration. Tears but dropp not. Thank you poet, you have drawn your feelings with poetic skill. 10+ Apoet Bangla