Forgiveness is the end of Past.
Conceived ideas begin to form:
An old mind crushing to dust:
The brave survivor of the storm!
As you reach your depths, you find
A wiser man at ease, with pride.
A passing sense of emptiness,
Numb, as old emotions had subsided:
Conclude that life is nothingness,
And Hope arises to bright your side:
In heart, the birth of a new dream,
Shows you the future path fulfilled.
A pragmatic write! .....life is nothingness, And Hope arises to bright your side: In heart, the birth of a new dream, Shows you the future path fulfilled......The expression unfolds the voice of a prudent and matured soul!
Deep, beautiful and enjoyable...thank you for sharing.....
This poem is like a descent into a valley, and the beginning of the ascent out of it. The title/opening line resonates through the poem. Forgiveness as closure. What better end can there be than looking backward not in anger but in forgiveness. But the descent into the valley comes after that, and at the bottom is A WISER MAN, AT EASE, I'm sure this is the consequence of forgiving, that is, he is the image of the psyche purged of anger, defensiveness, negative baggage. The second stanza seems to be a face-off between nothingness and hope. But the last two lines make it clear hope triumphs in the promise of future fulfillment.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Conclude that life is nothingness, And Hope arises to bright your side: In heart, the birth of a new dream, Shows you the future path fulfilled.......so touching with nice theme. A beautiful poem is amazingly shared here.