jack green

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Forgotten Sea - Poem by jack green

Have you ever felt cast away a nameless wave on a forgotten sea?
Did you think you could hold on against a never relenting wind?
Do you find yourself caught between what could have been and used to be?
Did you really think you were right, life is sweet until the bitter end.
Call this a veiled attempt to clear the air while i still can.
And did it really take all of these years to finely understand.
The most precious moments pass you by and then their gone.
This life has many paths some are right and some are wrong.
Could this really be as appears could there be more than can be seen.
Or will i wake to find that i am a nameless wave on a forgotten sea.

Comments about Forgotten Sea by jack green

  • Sara Fielder (1/26/2012 9:54:00 AM)

    Your poems hit me hard everytime. They are like being punched in the stomach. All I can say is that I want to read alot more of the great poet Jack Green! (Report) Reply

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  • (1/20/2012 6:58:00 PM)

    Valueing yourself and trying to figure out what you could of been worth is a commen look back when asscesing future reflections. The poem is soild and has good meaning to it. (Report) Reply

  • (1/10/2012 5:13:00 PM)

    Do you find yourself caught between what could have been and used to be? ....I find myself here every day.....but I know I am never alone, as there are so many of us lost in this place...haha...blessings... (Report) Reply

  • (12/30/2011 4:42:00 AM)

    Very thought provoking - with many strong lines that stood out to me - and felt like I could relate to - great job! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 23, 2011

Poem Edited: Tuesday, January 10, 2012

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