Foriegn-Beats >>> Poem by Manonton Dalan

Foriegn-Beats >>>

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I was in Tokyo one time
I am watching drummers
beat than drum endlessly
at first I can't understand
but then I notice patterns
of beats like story book

kids too go with drumbeats
by stomping their feet
some are jumping tirelessly
it does gives that fire in you
squeezing every inch of your being
I was so tired after that, thirsty
still I managed to take train home

Tuesday, January 19, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: culture
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lorraine Colon 20 January 2016

We can learn a lot from foreign culture. We should not be so quick to criticize, but wait to see what unfolds and what lessons can be learned. A very nice poem.

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Fatemeh Tarkashvand 20 January 2016

I do agree with you dear Lorraine colon and monanton described his feelings so good. welldone.

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Manonton Dalan

Manonton Dalan

virginia, usa
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