Manonton Dalan

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Foriegn-Beats >>> - Poem by Manonton Dalan

I was in Tokyo one time
I am watching drummers
beat than drum endlessly
at first I can't understand
but then I notice patterns
of beats like story book

kids too go with drumbeats
by stomping their feet
some are jumping tirelessly
it does gives that fire in you
squeezing every inch of your being
I was so tired after that, thirsty
still I managed to take train home

Topic(s) of this poem: culture


Comments about Foriegn-Beats >>> by Manonton Dalan

  • (1/20/2016 11:27:00 AM)


    We can learn a lot from foreign culture. We should not be so quick to criticize, but wait to see what unfolds and what lessons can be learned. A very nice poem. (Report) Reply

    Fatemeh Tarkashvand Fatemeh Tarkashvand (1/20/2016 1:37:00 PM)

    I do agree with you dear Lorraine colon and monanton described his feelings so good. welldone.

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, January 19, 2016



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