Fragrance Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Fragrance

Rating: 4.8


Thorn pierces blood from stem,
to make rose ever red.
Blossoms it to attract every eye,
and win all heart in the process.

The pain and suffering of thorn
never goes in vain,
despite fables spread across,
to undermine the supreme sacrifice.

Red rose truly acknowledges
by carrying toughness inside
and fragrance outside
to reach one and all.

Sunday, November 22, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shreya Hacks 17 October 2020

No matter how many times you read this poem every time you find something new clicking in your mind thanks for sharing this beautiful poem.....

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Brutry Brara 11 October 2020

One of its kind poem on sacrifice and love.

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M Asim Nehal 24 October 2020

Thx much Brutry./

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Darren Jkoeryo 17 October 2020

The pain and suffering of thorn never goes in vain, despite fables spread across, to undermine the supreme sacrifice.

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M Asim Nehal 24 October 2020

Thx.. Darren.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 09 April 2024

Brilliantly Bravo-worthy piece TFS

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Sylvia Frances Chan 09 April 2024

The final stanza says the Truth and nothing but The TRUTH. Gorgeously worded.5 Stars and TFS

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Bill Cantrell 09 April 2024

I come back to read this poem myself, Asim Nehal is a genuine poet as this poem starts out with pain with a sharing a fragrance

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Bill Cantrell 01 February 2024

This is absolutely brilliant, , each stanza is a poem in itself, this is one of the best poems I've ever read

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Denis Mair 16 November 2023

The rose is a good emblem of beauty's inextricable tie to suffering.

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