Free Birds And Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Free Birds And

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It's not about how the rift is formed between two hearts, but it's all about how it is healed forever.
..................... NANDHINI CHITHRA

Free birds and
Tuesday,3rd November 2020

we are all free birds
and search no words
for excuses
and misses

two hearts love
and believe
in its sanctity
as blessed by an almighty

there has to be some compromise
but not with the promises
it speaks badly on the part
but shall look nice if addressed from the start

life move on
with the happiness seen
on the face
and traces can be made out

if ever it hurts any of the two
it should not aggravate
but sorted out relatively
and immediately

the feelings should be restored
the attachment should be adored
again promises should be confirmed
and love must be restored

Dr Jadia Hasmukh

Free Birds And
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 11 November 2020

Two hearts love and believe. Two hearts feel and beautify themselves encouraging life's perspectives. Birds love freedom and feel it better. An amazing poem is well penned..

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 November 2020

the feelings should be restored the attachment should be adored again promises should be confirmed and love must be restored Dr Jadia Hasmukh

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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