Free Hug Poem by Richard Wlodarski

Free Hug

Rating: 5.0


While you're falling on the street
In the grasp of the wintery sleet
I'll catch you and see your frozen stare
Giving you a hug like a circus bear

I'll smile with friendly eyes
As you shy away with your sighs
I'll stretch out my hand in friendliness
Stirring to little talk of openness

While you're shivering and blushing
I'll offer my scarf for warming
I'll speak some stupid words
Stale bread crumbs for the birds

I'll softly touch your cold hand
And try to make you understand
I'm not some kinda strange weird lug
Inadvertently giving free hug

Saturday, December 17, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: acceptance,accident,comforting,communication,friend,human and animal,kindness,romantic,smile,strange
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mj Lemon 05 January 2017

This is excellent! This crosses and touches so many audiences....a children's poem. A love poem. Poetry for and about friendship and warmth. Really well done, Richard.

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Bharati Nayak 30 March 2017

Accidents if taken in literal sense are events that occur suddenly beyond our control, beyond our knowledge.The suddenness is its characteristic.It may put one in situations to meet strangers and require help.We may hesitate to seek help from strangers out of doubt or suspicion.The stranger too pauses before offering help as his good intention may be misunderstood. A wonderful poem, thanks for sharing.

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Richard Wlodarski 31 March 2017

Thank you so much for your insightful feedback, Bharati.

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Kevin Patrick 25 March 2017

Wonderful read! the rhythm and the rhyme convey the humor which is sublime. there are so many things going on in this which make it worthwhile, what I like is that you don't limit yourself to some paramour but the whole of humanity, either in need or just because its a nice deed, this spoils the cynic in me and the believer in beautiful people like you. Thanks for this poem, you hugged me without knowing it!

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Richard Wlodarski 27 March 2017

Humour and humanity. Today the world needs quite a bit of both. Kevin, your feedback is wonderful. And your closing words are priceless. Thank you so very much.

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Richard Wlodarski 25 March 2017

Literary license provided me the opportunity to use a composite of real life and fictional encounters ending in this one. Its intention was to have the reader ask the questions that you're posing. Without giving the answers.

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Bri Edwards 24 March 2017

so many topics! more topics than you have words in at least one whole poem i read! so..............was the hug an accident/inadvertent? OR planned and done in hopes of finding romance? ? human and animal? i usually think of humans as just another animal species, which it is. could the you in the poem be a dog? i don't think so. thanks for some rhymes. i almost always rhyme every couplet (is couplet the right word? !) , but i am glad when other poets do not 'force' rhymes. i think striving 'TOO HARD' for rhymes can hurt a poem; the meaning can suffer. bri ;)

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Sister Frances 06 January 2017

Wonderful poem, it's heart warming and written with a great sense of sencerity :)

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Richard Wlodarski 07 January 2017

Thank you, Sister Frances for your positive feedback.

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Richard Wlodarski 06 January 2017

Thank you, Sister for your positive feedback.

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