Free Space Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
Free Space
Free space
We are still not confident of our abilities
We lack confidence and ignore capabilities
Every individual has stored and reserved capacity
This is considered as one of the finest unknown quality
How come a person reacts angrily at failure?
Within a second he braces up to make it sure
As if nothing has happened to deter him for goal
Now he as to start afresh with another call
He need go for any special coaching for this exercise
Nature is there for providing clues and stand with promises
There comes complete change with one season following another
To discard the old and encourage human being to share and solder
No body ends life with little reversals
The success and failure affects little on their arrival
It provides enough of lessons to enjoy and share the grief
But always keep in mind that they stay for a while or brief
The sun rises and sets as usual without change
The nights change course and stay calm to manage
Birds as usual air the melody in the morning
Return to their nests with fulfillment of mission in the evening
If birds can survive with weak wings
We can sure face the draught as human being
We can’t run away from the scene as coward
Life is mission to survive and look forward
If life was to be like cake walk
It was not necessary to have any kind of talk
But the real things are far different
Some of the things are illusory even if look apparent
Have conciliatory approach and adjust the course
It may need some correction and brilliance of course
This is the trend which may warrant some sense of urgency
It may turn the tide in favor and change the frequency
ndsey Wingate and in this moment at this time i choose to be at peace with all that I can't control with all that I don't know with all that I choose to be at war with Give up hope of worry its failed me deeply to be at peace the quietness such a new experience delve in to authenticity dip into the realness of this just to breathe just to believe a beautiful thing this is 10 hours ago · Like
Some additional thoughts to your poem, 'Free Space' On Change 'The sun rises and sets as usual without change' But that is only in a life-time brief 'The nights change course and stay calm to manage' For the seasons give from tedium, relief. 'Birds as usual air the melody in the morning' With the rising sun 'Return to their nests with fulfillment of mission in the evening' Before darkness; as their work is done. s
Our time and energy levels are stipulated by God and men and women who decides through politics, tricks or other means our capabilities.....so we do not most often get our price...a minority Shah Rukh Khan can become indian superhero with luck and support but i cannot become prime minister or a nobleman in Afghanistan or Pakistan.This is because we believe in group theories for our survival of existence.Whoever affords it or are supported....they are well placed...i know the gujratis are more together from Mehsana to UK and to US..therefore they dominate with money..same as marwaris.... Unfortunately i belong to the clan of Netaji Subhas Bose...what happened with him? he became history with his abilities...so i will be the same...provincial discriminations and also intra-racial...i am hated in my own community as well not because of my abilities but because of some people`s inabilities which i highlighted and therefore threatened and nobody supported....all body there are small small groups of corruption tied up with money in Swiss bank accounts.... So Switzerland is made richer and richest perhaps by India without any effort or ability of their own inhabitants...they do not have to go to war for survival therefore... A good write and a good reminder Sir
A great write with overflowing optimism and positive energy. I like the poem as well as positive signals emaneting from it.
Absolutely right, a considerate, corrective approach can make things right.. some patience, belief in one's self and faith in God are the things which one needs to rise up... if life would have been simpler... we would have not enjoyed the happiest of the moments.. I like the title Free space... for me it is a space where a person enjoys his abilities, plans the future, is thoughtful... Ups and downs, its a human tendency to react negative because he never thought anything wrong could happen with him... You have covered all the points very well... Thanks for inviting :)
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really meaning full, , , , well penned...