Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 423,438 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Free Space - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Free space

We are still not confident of our abilities
We lack confidence and ignore capabilities
Every individual has stored and reserved capacity
This is considered as one of the finest unknown quality

How come a person reacts angrily at failure?
Within a second he braces up to make it sure
As if nothing has happened to deter him for goal
Now he as to start afresh with another call

He need go for any special coaching for this exercise
Nature is there for providing clues and stand with promises
There comes complete change with one season following another
To discard the old and encourage human being to share and solder

No body ends life with little reversals
The success and failure affects little on their arrival
It provides enough of lessons to enjoy and share the grief
But always keep in mind that they stay for a while or brief

The sun rises and sets as usual without change
The nights change course and stay calm to manage
Birds as usual air the melody in the morning
Return to their nests with fulfillment of mission in the evening

If birds can survive with weak wings
We can sure face the draught as human being
We can’t run away from the scene as coward
Life is mission to survive and look forward

If life was to be like cake walk
It was not necessary to have any kind of talk
But the real things are far different
Some of the things are illusory even if look apparent

Have conciliatory approach and adjust the course
It may need some correction and brilliance of course
This is the trend which may warrant some sense of urgency
It may turn the tide in favor and change the frequency


Comments about Free Space by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/1/2011 7:43:00 AM)


    ndsey Wingate and in this moment at this time
    i choose to be at peace
    with all that I can't control
    with all that I don't know
    with all that I choose to be at war with
    Give up hope of worry
    its failed me deeply
    to be at peace the quietness
    such a new experience
    delve in to authenticity
    dip into the realness of this
    just to breathe
    just to believe
    a beautiful thing
    this is
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  • (12/1/2011 7:01:00 AM)


    Some additional thoughts to your poem, 'Free Space'

    On Change

    'The sun rises and sets as usual without change'
    But that is only in a life-time brief
    'The nights change course and stay calm to manage'
    For the seasons give from tedium, relief.

    'Birds as usual air the melody in the morning'
    With the rising sun
    'Return to their nests with fulfillment of mission in the evening'
    Before darkness; as their work is done.

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  • Allemagne Roßmann (11/30/2011 8:08:00 AM)


    Our time and energy levels are stipulated by God and men and women who decides through politics, tricks or other means our capabilities.....so we do not most often get our price...a minority Shah Rukh Khan can become indian superhero with luck and support but i cannot become prime minister or a nobleman in Afghanistan or Pakistan.This is because we believe in group theories for our survival of existence.Whoever affords it or are supported....they are well placed...i know the gujratis are more together from Mehsana to UK and to US..therefore they dominate with money..same as marwaris....

    Unfortunately i belong to the clan of Netaji Subhas Bose...what happened with him? he became history with his abilities...so i will be the same...provincial discriminations and also intra-racial...i am hated in my own community as well not because of my abilities but because of some people`s inabilities which i highlighted and therefore threatened and nobody supported....all body there are small small groups of corruption tied up with money in Swiss bank accounts....

    So Switzerland is made richer and richest perhaps by India without any effort or ability of their own inhabitants...they do not have to go to war for survival therefore...

    A good write and a good reminder Sir
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  • (11/30/2011 7:47:00 AM)


    A great write with overflowing optimism and positive energy. I like the poem as well as positive signals emaneting from it. (Report) Reply

  • Jinal Oswal (11/30/2011 7:46:00 AM)


    Absolutely right, a considerate, corrective approach can make things right.. some patience, belief in one's self and faith in God are the things which one needs to rise up... if life would have been simpler... we would have not enjoyed the happiest of the moments.. I like the title Free space... for me it is a space where a person enjoys his abilities, plans the future, is thoughtful... Ups and downs, its a human tendency to react negative because he never thought anything wrong could happen with him... You have covered all the points very well... Thanks for inviting :) (Report) Reply

  • (11/30/2011 7:34:00 AM)


    really meaning full, , , , well penned... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, November 30, 2011



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